Friday, February 19, 2021

YOU and ME

You and me are unknown. We are in a loop. Wandering infinitely in a translucent horizon. We are a mystic, you and me. A mystery which is away from the fair and realistic shades of the world, carrying the dreams that we have never told anyone. We are two strangers bruised by our past, obscured from our present and unknown from our future. 
We are the uncertain fears, the unnamed desires and the unsung melodies. 
We are like an unfinished book. You know, like the fading ink on the withered yellow page which is stuck with a dried feather?
We are like the unrevealed story of that book. A story left in agonies, waiting to know its end; afraid, shaking, shattering and questioning whether it would be peaceful like ever or dreadful like...never? 
But...
but believing it to be magnificent no matter what! And still..awaiting. 

Awaiting for the mystic to unfold and finally meet each other on the last page. 
With hope, 
-Your destiny.

27 comments:

  1. What a topic you have chosen, 'destiny', really we all are living a life uncertain in every aspect though we try to make it certain through our future plans. Still we are always surprised by our fate, our destiny. Hats off to you for handling such a vast, deep subject so boldly.

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  2. It’s really a wonderful write up giving a slight and cute twist in the end. Destiny always hides something unknown but dear as pointed out by Tennyson in his poem Ulyssses,
    “Yet all experience is an arch wherethro'
    Gleams that untravell'd world whose margin fades
    For ever and forever when I move.”
    Moving to something unknown is also wonderful and challenging.. great writing beta...

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  3. Very nice write up of author's feeling and understanding about life. I personally feel one could visualise his destiny, if wishes strongly. It needs high moral and ethical standards while coming across your life. But it is worth appreciating that Indian youngsters are thinking on this way. Best Wishes....

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  4. हम अपने अतीत से त्रस्त दो अजनबी हैं, जो हमारे वर्तमान से अस्पष्ट हैं और हमारे भविष्य से अज्ञात हैं।
    हम अनिश्चित भय, अनाम इच्छाएँ और अनसुनी धुन हैं। really fabulous dear👌👌👏👏

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  5. Beautiful the flow of the mind and the words...

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  6. Great expression of thought, crisp, with a lot of depth. Enriched lucid composition. Kudos to you Ananya👌🏻👍🏻👏🏻

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  7. छान लिहितेस अनन्या, मला आवडते तुझी शैली.तुला खूप खूप शुभेच्छा.💐💐

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  8. My god Ananya...! What is ur age... And what a thinking level u achieved. While reading every line I was thinking about the depth of the words...
    Mind blowing dear.
    Very nice.
    Keep it up.

    Regards:
    Renuka.

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  9. Oh!.. it's really a sweet writing...it really takes a reader to unknown, mystic and unfathomable world and life.. and that is the sweetness of life.. that it is unknown and mystic.. the writing touches philosophical and spiritual sheds of human life and inner world of an individual..

    असंख्य ह्या दीर्घिका अनं असंख्य हे तारे
    चंद्र, ग्रह, सूर्य अनं ब्रम्हांड हे सारे
    शाश्वताचे साक्षी होती पाहती हे अज्ञात..

    God bless you Ananya for further writings..👍👍

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  10. Superb Ananya... Keep it up... Very nice ly written..

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  11. Beautiful amalgamation of the feelings of uncertainty and hope.

    Truly, the real pleasure is in the journey.

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  12. Well, you destined to follow footsteps of your father like he is following his father's, it seems. Destiny is one's past, present and future. And that latter aspect which bewilders one. You are a good writer and destined to be better , just keep on.

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  13. एका मनस्वी कलावंताचे मनःपूर्वक अभिनंदन.
    खूप सुंदर..!!

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  14. अप्रतिम बेटा. खूप छान लिहिले आहेस.

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