It was all quiet. The world was still.
Every human and living soul on the land stood frozen.The blooming wind stopped in the orange sky , the
setting sun halted its journey towards the drowned ocean. The waves were
waiting to get back to their chaotic melodies. The leaves of the trees annulled
its falling on the bare ground. The worries and stress of each human mind
disappeared for a while. The anxiety, insecurity, the hatred and disbelief
caught a corner to hide themselves. And the conversation of thoughts, running
of the ideas, the dreams of the past ,the fear of the present and the visions
of the future, the laugh, the wail, the anguish, the sorrow..everything just
broke down into pieces in the palace of my mind as I had my eyes closed. The
only thing remained was "Tranquility"!! I was ME at that time. A complete and a perfect soul. I was just happy and
nothing else . I forgot all the ugly truths and beautiful lies of the real
world and at that moment I met myself. I felt good to exist. I felt energetic.
I had gained everything in that spark. At that point, I loved myself entirely
along with my scars and glows, along with my imperfections and beauty, along
with my virtues and vices. I was calm and was filled with serenity.
And then softly, as I opened my eyes, I felt myself being surrounded by a
mystical energy, a positive air and a majestic world. What was it? Was it a fantastical dream? Was it a dreadful magic? Was it some beautiful journey? Was
it the road towards the magnificent sky? What was it?
There was sweet fragrance
floating in the air. It was of my ashes that lied on the ground. The ashes that
had turned my whites and my blacks into the greys. There were the flames of “acceptance
of myself” burning out of the fire. There was the rising of a clean soul out of
the smoke and it left behind all its mysteries. And then I realized that it was
nothing but the end of an era. An end of an amazing journey. An end of the
breathing of my soul, the pumping of my heart, the busy work of my brain, an
end of my anxious mind, the memories, the presence of good and bad people and an
end of my beautiful life. And finally as I started walking on the road of that
dreamy world, my peace found it’s path and I said to myself,"Life was the
greatest gift but, indeed…the death is so beautiful!"
Ananya ...... So amazing write up ! Keep it up ......
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DeleteWell done Ananya... beautiful write up..keep it up..
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DeleteAmazing..just too good..believe this is just the beginning of many more such beautiful and heart warming piece of writing.all the best
ReplyDeleteNice article dear.....
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DeleteHealing start of writing.... All the best.
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ReplyDeleteVery nice! Wishing all the best!
ReplyDeleteBeautiful articulation Ananya..
ReplyDeleteBeautiful articulation Ananya.
Deleteवा वा,खूप सुंदर चिंतन!
DeleteThank you so much everyone for all your wishes and blessings. They make me grow and progress and they complete me. I hope I continue to write like this under your guidance and blessings.Thank you!
DeleteWow great begining Anaya!! Well written!great going!
ReplyDeleteThank you so much everyone for all your wishes and blessings. They make me grow and progress and they complete me. I hope I continue to write like this under your guidance and blessings.Thank you!
DeleteVery nice write up I deed. Out of the box thinking at this tender age. Good going. Carry on.
ReplyDeleteThank you so much everyone for all your wishes and blessings. They make me grow and progress and they complete me. I hope I continue to write like this under your guidance and blessings.Thank you!
DeleteVery nice write up I deed. Out of the box thinking at this tender age. Good going. Carry on.
ReplyDeleteThank you so much everyone for all your wishes and blessings. They make me grow and progress and they complete me. I hope I continue to write like this under your guidance and blessings.Thank you!
DeleteNice.. Best luck Ananya.
ReplyDeleteThank you so much everyone for all your wishes and blessings. They make me grow and progress and they complete me. I hope I continue to write like this under your guidance and blessings.Thank you!
Delete"DEATH" - so beautifully described! Long live Ananya!
ReplyDeleteTry other subjects too! You have a long way to go and you will definitely go places. This is the practising stage. No need to mix your own personality traits into your writing every time. A writer has to keep aloof from his narrations - to give justice to the matter at hand. Nobody knows beforehand and has to decide each time - what style will be more appropriate for describing a given situation. So, every form and structure of literature has its own place. I have gone through some of your Facebook posts and felt that you are somewhat a serious natured person. May I expect some humour in your next blog? Don't worry! That will also help enrich your already impressive stock of words. (Should I say vocabulary?)
Wishing you all the best!
Thank you so much Sir. I will surely try and bring your advices into my writeups. Thank you for encouraging and guiding me towards the improvements. I will surely carry them on with me! Thank you for your blssings. 😊
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ReplyDeleteThanksss a lottt dear!! 😘😘😘It means soo much to me!
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ReplyDeleteGood job Ananya
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