इस बेकफ़न बदन को चुबती ठंड से,
आज़ाद हवाओं में कैद मेरी अंगड़ाई से,
मुरादों से भरी इस नदी में किसी मग़रूर के बहते ग़मो से,
और
किनारे से झांकती मेरी अपनी ही हक़ीक़त से,
मुलाक़ात होती है।
मगर हर सवेरे मैं युही मेरे ख्वाबों की फटी चादर को तह कर रखता हूं,
बस युही मेरी रंजिशों को चेहरे की सिलवटों के पीछे छिपाता हूं।
हर सवेरे मैं युही बालों को सवारता हूं,
बिखरे मेरे आँसुओ को बस युही समेट कर रखता हूं।
किसे पता, शायद किसी रोज़ ज़िंदगी से भी मुलाक़ात हो जाये।
Photo Credit: Mr. Nitin Salunke
#mannkasturi in collaboration with Mr. Nitin Salunke
व्वाह खूपच सुंदर लिखाण
ReplyDeleteWhat an emotional and factful touch...!! Very well said Ananya... You have glorified the words very beautifully... Such an emotional & innocent heart you have... Great great... Keep going with your beautiful thoughts.👌🏻😊👍🏻
ReplyDeleteKupach chan💖 so meaningful n touching..
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ReplyDeleteKhup chan 👌👌👌
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ReplyDeleteGreat dear... I appreciate your insight to see life and its nuances not by your eyes only but by heart also....
ReplyDeleteVery appropriate and heart touching poem on the photograph,what a talent in a little age
ReplyDeleteVery appropriate and heart touching poem on the photograph,what a talent in a little age
ReplyDeleteVery appropriate and heart touching poem on the photograph,what a talent in a little age
ReplyDeleteव्वा.. खूपच विचारगर्भ व संवेदनशील लेखन. भाषाप्रभुत्व व शब्दांची ताकद अप्रतिम.💐
ReplyDeleteVery appropriate and heart touching poem on the photograph,what a talent in a little age
ReplyDeleteSunder....sirji
ReplyDeleteवाह ..वास्तव
ReplyDeleteशब्द रचना अप्रतिम
ReplyDeleteExcellent
ReplyDeleteBahut hi badhiya
ReplyDeleteBeautiful and emotional
ReplyDeleteअप्रतिम 🌹🌹🌹🌹
ReplyDeleteKya baat ananya👏👏👏aankho se dikhane vali har shai (शै )ko dil se chhoone ki koshish apne aap me behatareen hai...keep it up👍
ReplyDeleteSo beautiful & touching . What a great experience after reading. Bahot khub dil paya hai tumne is internet ke jamane me .
ReplyDeleteशुद्ध हिंदी मधील सौन्दर्य👌, आणि तुझे बाबा म्हणतात तशी जाणिव झळकतेय, नव वर्षात तुला उत्तम दोन कसदार मंडळी सोबत भेट घालुन दयायची आहे, माणस वाचता आली की लिहता छान येते, भेटु - पंकज
ReplyDeleteYou write very well. Keep writing like this. Many wishes to you.
ReplyDeletePhoto reading is an art and you are good photo reader keep it up
good luck👍
डॉ.प्रवीण गुल्हाने
ReplyDeleteअप्रतिम लिखाण अनन्या!खूप खूप शुभेच्छा!!
Apt, appropriate but piercing in aproach even if, subtly! Reintroducing the audience to the raw ways of life! Kudos for picking up the thread, the thought and moulding it through such rich communication embellished in appropriate words befitting the theme! Keep it up dear, keep it up!
ReplyDeleteVery nice ananya....
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ReplyDeleteApratim.. Behad Sunder...
So deep thinking and understanding.. and insight into emotional process of comprehension, assimilation of knowledge..gr8 cognitive empathy in such tender age..keep nurturing it..
ReplyDeleteखूप छान! राष्ट्र भाषेवर देखील एवढे प्रभुत्व! बाब निश्चितच वाखाणण्यासारखी आहे.
ReplyDeleteGreat emphatic writing Beta. God bless you. Looking forward eagerly to many more in future.
ReplyDeleteGreat insightful representation of human emotions collated in a beautiful poetry. God bless you Ananya, keep on creating pearls of wisdom👌🏻👍🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻
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